Essay Feedback
A detailed review of your draft, covering argument structure, use of evidence, clarity of expression, and philosophical rigour.
Best for students with a draft who want targeted, actionable feedback before submission.
Online one-to-one Philosophy tutoring
Struggling with your Philosophy essays? Let's fix that.
I help undergraduate and postgraduate Philosophy students write clearer arguments, understand difficult material, and achieve the grades their work deserves.
- MSc
- Philosophy, Edinburgh
- BA
- Philosophy and History, Cardiff
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Why BFD Tutors
Built for students who understand more than their essays show.
I finished my degree having missed a First by two marks. Instead of moving on, I became focused on the question that now shapes my tutoring: what separates a good Philosophy essay from an excellent one?
BFD Tutors is for students who want practical help with argument structure, essay planning, philosophical clarity, and assessment expectations. The aim is simple: better essays without losing your own voice.
How I Can Help
Three focused ways to improve your essays.
Each session is one-to-one, online, and tailored to the specific problem in front of you.
Essay Planning
Most popularA one-to-one session where we unpack your essay question, develop a clear argument, and build a logical structure before you write.
Best for students who feel stuck before they start or whose essays tend to lack direction.
Concept and Theory Explanation
A focused session on a philosopher, argument, text, or area of Philosophy that is not yet making sense.
Best for students who want to deepen their understanding, not just polish an essay.
What You Get
A clearer route from confusion to submission.
Question clarity
Work out what the essay is really asking before you spend hours writing around it.
Argument structure
Turn ideas, notes, and readings into a line of reasoning that a marker can follow.
Assessment alignment
Connect your essay to the academic conventions and marking expectations of Philosophy.
Pricing
Simple options, no hidden pathway.
One-off session
£70
Targeted help with one essay, plan, argument, or writing issue.
Monthly tutoring plan
£250
Four one-to-one sessions across the month for ongoing essay and argument support.
All support is designed to strengthen your own reasoning and written expression.
Resources
Want a taster first?
Start with the free guide, then explore low-cost resources and essays before you book a session.
Featured free guide
Free Philosophy Essay Writing Guide
A practical guide to planning, structuring, and sharpening Philosophy essays.
Articles
Practical guides for better Philosophy essays.
How to write a Philosophy essay that actually argues.
Using AI without losing academic integrity.
A student guide to logical reasoning and deductive arguments.
FAQ
Common questions before you book.
Who is this for?
Mostly undergraduate and postgraduate Philosophy students who want help with essays, arguments, concepts, and academic writing.
What happens in a free intro call?
We talk through what you are working on, where you feel stuck, and whether tutoring is the right next step. There is no payment required to book the call.
Can you write my essay for me?
No. The work stays yours. The support is there to clarify your argument, improve structure, and strengthen your understanding.
Do you help with AI use?
Yes. I can help you think clearly about responsible AI use in academic settings, while keeping your work honest and defensible.
Ready when you are
Not sure where to start? Let's talk it through.
Send a short message about your essay, deadline, or topic. I will reply with the next best step.
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